Exorcising Ghosts by mldbatnys

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1. Chapter 1: Chasing Down the Dream by mldbatnys [Reviews - 1] (2288 words)

2. Chapter 2: Explanations by mldbatnys [Reviews - 0] (3794 words)

3. Chapter 3 by mldbatnys [Reviews - 0] (3057 words)

4. Chapter 4 by mldbatnys [Reviews - 0] (6778 words)

5. Chapter 5 by mldbatnys [Reviews - 1] (4488 words)

6. Chapter 6 by mldbatnys [Reviews - 0] (5182 words)

7. Chapter 7 by mldbatnys [Reviews - 0] (6320 words)

8. Chapter 8 by mldbatnys [Reviews - 0] (5169 words)

9. Chapter 9 by mldbatnys [Reviews - 0] (5156 words)

Ecompassion: I am going to have them work on things slowly, since I need to keep them in Italy a bit longer, as for Nik, he is going to lose the hospital and Jason is going to find out he knew about Claudia and Michael. As for Michael, no he isn't one of the possible father, btw, Johnny is still going to play with her to use against Carly. Johnny O is going to be hurt, badly but I am debating on it being Michael. As for Spixie, she is going to sleep with Lucky, I just haven't decided how Spin finds out. That is the only part of the current stories I have been reading about that I like. Spixie getting blown out of the water. PJ: I think you will enjoy what Johnny O does to and with Carly. Jax is going to get all the evidence he needs for permanent custody courtesy of Carly herself. As for the records, Diane is going to be playing a bigger role in that part. As for the current clue, I have actually visited this spot, we stayed at the hotel for the weekend. Jo-Ann: I never liked Billy Warlock as AJ, loved Sean Keanan and have always thought that Roger Howarth would be great in the role. So when I am writing AJ it is with their voices in mind. If that helps any. And thanks for the idea, I could run with the idea of Carly and the porky prince. Oldwoman: ding ding ding, yes it is the Greenbrier. Yes, Jason did explain in the letter and I think that more than anything is going to get him in deep trouble. F18tah3: All of PC is in for a shock, we are going to have a huge reveal in a few chapters. A few people are going to be eating crow, including Robin. Meimei: Sam and Carly both suck, they are going to be being played off one another in a way that I think you all will enjoy. Remember, most writers have described O'Brien as a bit of a horn dog, well he is certainly not going to have a problem getting them to kill one another. And yes it is the resort. Renee: Johnny O is going to have an outlet for his pain. The complete destruction of a few of PC's residents. ROO: You are on the right track, at least as for one of the daddies. Peep: My hubby is a Pitt fan and after the game this weekend, I should forget the state of WV even exists. By the way, I have been down to that lake near you while in college. We have also stayed at the Greenbrier it is beautiful there, White Sulfur Springs is wonderful.

 

10. Chapter 10 by mldbatnys [Reviews - 0] (6259 words)

11. Chapter 11 by mldbatnys [Reviews - 0] (6785 words)

12. Chapter 12 by mldbatnys [Reviews - 0] (8298 words)

13. Chapter 13 by mldbatnys [Reviews - 1] (7616 words)

PJ: I intend to wreck havoc this chapter. Nik, Lucky and Lulu won't know what hit them by the end of it. (Insert evil laugh) Carly on the other hand won't know which way is up, I wanted Jerry captured in PC and decided to let him take out Sonny for me. Originally I had Michael doing that, but then had the idea how the last chapter ended. Ecompassion: Oh, Spin still might die, but I wanted Jason there first. Nik = beat down but I am planning on letting someone else deliver it. And Lucky and the skank, I want maximum exposure for that secret. Renee: I had to do it, the idea of Georgie holding the gun was part of the original script but I had them all walking into it, then changed it to just Johnny. Sour and Sweet: Tracy is just getting started, this chapter is going to show that. Remember she is the only Quartermaine in town. Edward is in Ireland, and the rest are winging their way to town. Sassy: Maxie is going to lose it, I was going to pair her with Lucky but decided to go another way midstream. As for Nik, the pride goeth before the fall. Roo: I told all of you Sam would witness that, I just changed the when. Now is the start of a possible Michael intervention, haven't decided if it will work, but will try to find a way to write it plausibly. Jo-Ann: Most of these chapters were written during the holidays, but weren't beta-d which is why some are so long. I kept expanding on scenes while checking them over. Cam's telling is going to give me a chance to blow a few people out of the water. As for Alexis and Johnny, expanding that wasn't part of the outline, it just keeps happening. They are writing it themselves.

14. Chapter 14 by mldbatnys [Reviews - 0] (1357 words)

15. Chapter 15 by mldbatnys [Reviews - 0] (7224 words)

16. Chapter 16 by mldbatnys [Reviews - 0] (6781 words)

17. Chapter 17 by mldbatnys [Reviews - 0] (7687 words)

18. Chapter 18 by mldbatnys [Reviews - 0] (4849 words)

19. Chapter 19 by mldbatnys [Reviews - 0] (5678 words)

20. Chapter 20 by mldbatnys [Reviews - 0] (8232 words)

21. Chapter 21 by mldbatnys [Reviews - 0] (5702 words)

22. Chapter 22 by mldbatnys [Reviews - 0] (6583 words)

23. Chapter 23 The End by mldbatnys [Reviews - 0] (13378 words)